Changeset 173 in openpam

Timestamp:

Oct 28, 2002, 1:37:44 PM (18 years ago)

Author:

Dag-Erling Smørgrav

Message:

Grammar nit + reorder entries.

File:

• trunk/doc/xsso_errata.txt (modified) (4 diffs)

trunk/doc/xsso_errata.txt

@@ -1 @@
-$P4: //depot/projects/openpam/doc/xsso_errata.txt#8 $
+$P4: //depot/projects/openpam/doc/xsso_errata.txt#9 $
 
 Errata in XSSO, chapter 5:
@@ -17 +17 @@
 
 p. 34:  "PAM_AUTH_ERR" is misspelled as "PAM_AUTH_ERROR" in the
-        second-last line of the DESCRIPTION section.
+        second-to-last line of the DESCRIPTION section.
 
 p. 40:  in the second paragraph of the DESCRIPTION section, the phrase
@@ -25 +25 @@
         should be "PAM_AUTHTOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHTOK", respectively.
 
-p. 60:  "PAM_AUTHOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHOK" in the DESCRIPTION section
-        should be "PAM_AUTHTOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHTOK", respectively.
-
-p. 62:  the target_authtok_len argument to pam_set_mapped_authtok() is
-        of type size_t, not a size_t *.
-
 p. 52:  PAM_CONV_ERR is listed out of order and with the explanatory
         text "Conversation failure" instead of "Conversation error".
@@ -37 +31 @@
 p. 59:  the last argument pam_set_data() should be written void
         (*cleanup)(...), not void *(cleanup)(...).
+
+p. 60:  "PAM_AUTHOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHOK" in the DESCRIPTION section
+        should be "PAM_AUTHTOK" and "PAM_OLDAUTHTOK", respectively.
+
+p. 62:  the target_authtok_len argument to pam_set_mapped_authtok() is
+        of type size_t, not a size_t *.
 
 p. 66:  the first occurrence of "pam_acct_mgmt" in the NAME section